Kent Wayne

The First Distraction

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DirtySciFiBuddha
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Pain made you stronger.

That was the rule.

Push harder.
Train longer.
Outlast everyone.

Atryia never plateaued.
Never broke.

He didn’t believe in weakness.

Until recently.

Something had begun slipping into his thoughts —
not doubt…

awareness.

And he couldn’t afford it.

The battlefield isn’t where the real fracture begins.

Enter the War

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8 responses to “The First Distraction”

  1. freyanrites Avatar
    freyanrites

    Started reading this the day before I discovered you’d released the third book in your Unbound Realm series! Managed to read chapter one before my kindle died. Love the first chapter – it’s very different from the other novels I’ve read of yours. Looking forward to finishing it as soon as I can fix the kindle or buy a new one!

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    1. DirtySciFiBuddha Avatar
      DirtySciFiBuddha

      Yes, all the books have very different tones, but because Atriya was my first protagonist, he appears in all of them at least as an Easter egg. 🙂

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      1. freyanrites Avatar
        freyanrites

        LOL!

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  2. bamul1023c61941 Avatar
    bamul1023c61941

    Its an inside job. Well done Kent. Brendan

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    1. DirtySciFiBuddha Avatar
      DirtySciFiBuddha

      Thanks!

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  3. V.M.Sang Avatar
    V.M.Sang

    I like Atriya. A great character. I’m glad you haven’t dumped him.

    Vivienne

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    1. DirtySciFiBuddha Avatar
      DirtySciFiBuddha

      Thanks! He’s my first protagonist, so he shows up in the other books, even if it’s just a small part

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  4. shredbobted Avatar
    shredbobted

    Forgot how good this was. Thanks for reminding me.

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