Why Operators Wear the Rig

The Department liked to describe Crusaders as disciplined professionals.

The truth was simpler.

Most of them loved attention.

The linkup was a symbol.

A black spinal column running down the back of an elite killer.

Civilians noticed it instantly.

Fear.
Awe.
Respect.

Operators moved through the streets like sharks through water.

Atriya understood the appeal.

He just wasn’t sure the symbol represented the kind of warrior he wanted to become.

Speed. Precision. Violence at a dead run.

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9 responses to “Why Operators Wear the Rig”

  1. This is a great hook. The imagery of the ‘black spinal column’ and operators moving like sharks is vivid. It sets the tone quickly while also hinting at Atriya’s internal conflict.

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    1. Thanks! I’ll pass the praise to my marketer.

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    Vachon Bullock

    You writing has a certain kind of resolve and discipline that makes a person want to be the same way. It’s bold, not arrogant, inspirational, and appreciated.

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  3. I love this idea, I’m going to try it! ❤

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  4. Another great ad. I love the description of the operators as sharks, and the hint that Atriya isn’t comfortable with it.

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    1. I’m so happy you’re liking these ads! I’ll definitely pass on the sentiments to my marketer! 😁

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